Do you love to go on scary things such as roller coasters, the Tower Of Terror, or big water slides? Well, I have been on scary roller coasters, the Tower Of Terror, but... not a big water slide! Have you ever been on a water slide that literary drops? What was your reaction when you were going down? Read this story to find out MY reaction, and find out if your reaction is similar to mine or not. Was my story the same as yours? Read this, then comment if you have ever been on a slide like this and write if your reaction is the same or not and what you did please? I hope that you like this story and enjoy!!! :)
Great detail! I felt like I was on the real slide. Your story was soooo much better than mine. Also you had some clues in the heading.
ReplyDeleteI don't know about that! Your story was great too!
DeleteYour story was amazing! It had dialogue, emotion, correct punctuation, and I can go on an on an on. I also loved your intro. It had questions at the beginning which really made the reader relate and think before actually reading the story.
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