I deserve a day off from school because I hate always getting up at 6:00 in the morning weekday because we live far away from the school. I also deserve a day off from school especially on Tuesday, because I have swimming lessons, then I have to come up fast for a piano lesson so it is lots of work on that day. Last but not least, I can catch up on seeing my family members. When we go to bed, the people in America wake up, and I have to go to bed early every weekday, so I don't get to see them since they are always in bed by the time I'm going to bed! My friends too! I need some time to play with them! Those are some reasons why I think that I should have a day off from school!
I think this is really good and I'm convinced that you needed that long weekend. I can definitely relate to not wanting to wake up in the morning. Maybe you could use a few less exclamation points, though. Otherwise, great job!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Alyssa, I can also relate to waking up early... ugh. You also put in a lot of detail. But I think you can maybe separate it into paragraphs. Fantastic job, otherwise!!!!
DeleteI would also love a day off school. With after school activities we should really get a break we get home late and we wake up super early.
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job convincing me that you need a day off from school. I also liked your reasons because other people could relate to it. Like I could relate to waking up super early in the morning.
ReplyDeleteGood job Julia. I like how you put a lot of detail and describe why you want a day off
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