Tuesday, 26 November 2013

The Message In The Book Wonder


We finished the book Wonder, and I thought it was a really good story! It was very meaning full and it had lots of messages, but here is one that I thought was important.

I think that the message in the book Wonder is: It's not about what's on the out- side, but what's on the inside. I think this because have you seen way August has acted? Is he mean, and selfish? No! He is really nice, and is kind-hearted. So, what I mean by it's not about what's on the outside, but what's on the inside is August could have this really super duper, gross, weird looking face, but on the inside, how does he act? He acts friendly, and that's all it takes to be a good person, the inside.

My P.E. Push-ups

This is me doing my push-ups in P.E. Here are some things that I did well on, and some things that I could improve on.

I did a really good job on:

  • Going slow and not way to fast.
  • Going down all the way.
  • My hands were facing straight and not side-ways. 
Some things that I could improve on:
  • Maybe I could go a little slower.
  • Right as I would go down, I would fall, catch myself, then come back up. So not falling down.
  • My back could be more straight and not curved.

     

Monday, 25 November 2013

My Favorite Book In The Genre Ice Cream Challenge.

O.M.G.Y.H.T.R.T.B
Otherwise known as “Oh My Gosh You Have To Read This Book
Title: A Long Walk To WaterAuthor: Linda Sue Park


Reason:  What would you do if you were in school and all of the sudden BAM! You hear loud gunshots outside, and you are away from your family? I would be terrified if I were in that situation.  You would love this book because it is full of adventure! There is adventure here, there, and everywhere! This book starts off with a normal average day in school in the village of Loun-Ariik. Then something terrible happens. You will have to read this book to find out. But later in the book there’s lots of dying, emotion, and traveling. In the end it could be very happy, or it could be sad, but I want you to read it to find out! You can find
A Long Walk To Water in the IS library, but it’s so popular that you may have to go to the MS library to find it. A Long Walk To Water is like a R-S level.  Also, as you can see, A Long Walk To Water is an Adventure and Historical Fiction book. If you like this book, Linda Sue Park has also published A Single Shard, When My Name Was Keoko, and Click. Last but not least, A Long Walk To Water was published in 2010, and it  is still the best selling book, so you should read it! Have fun reading!

My Persuasive Essay

I thought that this persuasive essay is pretty good. After you read this, you will never ever in your life to smoke! It took some time to write this up, but it was worth it. If you have moms, dad, aunts, uncles, even friends who smoke, show them this because (I even say this in the essay) I really don't want people to smoke. You can help me to stop these smokers by reading this and telling the smokers all you learned in this essay. I hope you enjoy reading it!

I think that I did well on:
  • Not having an attitude on which people should or should not do.
  • Didn't say I hope I have convinced you, because I did convince you.
  • Talked about lot's of ways how you get the things that I'm talking about.

Some things that I could improve on:
  • Need to find more facts to fit my three reasons.
  • More ways to end my body paragraphs because they all end with "now you know why you should not smoke"
  • Find better descriptive words in my essay.


Thursday, 14 November 2013

UN Day! Yay!

UN day, finished! Wow has it been a long day for me. I am really proud of all of us because our presentation is great! There were some times in videos were people would get embarrassed, but it was still awesome! Look at this video and you will see that it is not bad at all. (And it has great music along with it!) Plus learn about all different kind of authors around the world. Please comment about what you think is good about this presentation, and some things that we can work on! Hope you enjoy! :)