Goal 1

What:  In stories, I will use more spicy words so readers can feel the emotions and visualise what's happening.

How:  I will do this by adding important details to make my pieces more interesting and clear.

By When:  I will do this by Thanksgiving break.

 12/13/12
It has been past Thanksgiving break and I am writing a story at my house. It was so lame but now since we've made our personal stories I've been putting in more spicy words like yelled instead of shouted. I think I did a lot of progress!


12/19/12
Today actually I was doing my essay and I looked over it and said in my mind, "This is really boring,
so I think that I should put in more spicy words!" so I put in much more spicy words!

1/15/13 

I am writing a movie (that is very short) and I was reading through it and I said I myself, "I think that this is not a finished piece! I need more spicy words!" So I put in not that many but some spicy words!

1/26/13

In poetry I am writing poems that have some spicy words! I can't think of anymore times that I did it this week but I did use spicy words in my poetry!


1/31/13
I think yesterday I was told on my homework to write 2 poems. If I remember I am pretty sure that I used some spicy words. So ya. I used spicy words in my sentences!


2/4/13

Today this took place in writing but we were again doing poems and I was just thinking and thinking of a word. I am not sure if it was spicy spicy but it did have some spicy words in it!


2/21/13

We were wring poems on day and this is one poem that I didn't put on my blog I think but I used a little bit of spicy words in my poems!


2/25/13

I don't have any evidence of using spicy words this week! :(


2/6/13

I not sure if it is spicy words or not but I think that some of the words I used in my animal of the ocean I am studying. I at least used words that I typically don't use! 

2/11/13

Today we were writing our poetry tools and poetry doors and Mrs. Gaskell told us we could not copy off of what she wrote so instead I used a different sentence and it had some spicy words in it. Even Mrs. Gaskell looked at it and said "good!" or something like that!


3/18/13

I do not have any evidence of using spicy words this week but this is the last time I can say that I did't have any evidence!